So this is my new song. I'd love to know what you guys think.
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I've been playing/writing on and off for a while and i'd like to be able to play in front of an audience and maybe even get a band together. While I'm working on that though, I though I could try and feel it out and see how some of my stuff is received.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=67Y5hLfaTlE

CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is always appreciated too.
Thanks guys